PDP (P7, P8, D2)

My Personal Development Plan document (final)
PDP (final) - Dawid Bartel

I had to fill out my PDP each week, recording the tasks I had done and writing about how they went. If I had encountered any challenges, I would then write how I overcame these challenges and what I would do differently in the future.

Evaluation by Kallum Groves
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Kallum had reviewed by PDP and what he found, was that I didn't put the dates in. On the other hand, my overall grammar, terminology and spelling was good.
I also missed out a couple of important sections such as what the task was, what were the challenges I faced and what would I do different in the future.

I have took the evaluation and the advice given by him and improved my PDP.

Draft of PDP
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This was my draft PDP document, before it was evaluated by one of my peers.

My review of Kallum's PDP
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EVALUATION OF KALLUM'S PDP
I had reviewed Kallum's Personal Development Plan as well. He wasn't consistent with his grammar and his sentence structure, although he used the terminology correctly.
Also, he missed out some of the information required, such as how he overcame the obstacles he encountered.

He then took my advice and acted on my review. He carefully proofread his work and checked the grammar and corrected all his spelling mistakes. He also made sure to include an action plan and the obstacles he had encountered and how he would overcome them.

EVALUATION OF MY PDP AFTER KALLUM REVIEWED IT
Kallum had reviewed by PDP and what he found, was that I didn't put the dates in. On the other hand, my overall grammar, terminology and spelling was good.
I also missed out a couple of important sections such as what the task was, what were the challenges I faced and what would I do different in the future.

If I was to do the PDP again and improve upon it, I would look out for the way I structure the document so that I wouldn't miss out any important sections such as the dates and the tasks and what action plan would I take if I was to do it again.